"...and they lived happily ever after", concluded Sia, tucking her daughter into bed.
"That was such a sweet story Mummy", murmured Ritu, sleep playing in her doll-like eyes.
"Are they still happy?"
The door yawned ever so lightly.
Rahul had come to collect his wife.
"Yes they are", smiled Sia as their eyes made love.
*Image Happily Ever After by Snigglefritz
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Awww… that was some sweet 55 fiction, dear! You know I loved it, don’t you! :)
PS: did i mention i loved it?
PPS: no, seriously, did i mention i loved it?!!
That's weird to post on 31st January and your blog mentions 1st February. It is so cool. Is it an ending?
That last line sums up almost everything... :)
Too good!
Peace.
Thanks Lena sweetu! :)
P.S. You told me? :O
P.P.S. Me is flattered :P
Lol Ropi!It is 1st here and I posted it at exactly 12am :P
It is whatever you want it to be :)
Thanks Kartz! :)
This is the same prayer I have for you my dear friend- that you and Kabir will live happily ever after. I pray that everything is okay with both of you and that your relationship is getting stronger. I also pray that your plan marriage come November will push through. I pray to God that He showers you both with all the blessings in His great storehouse of blessings. Thanks for the post. God bless you always.
I cannot say how touched I am by your thoughtfulness my dear friend.Thank you so much for you never-ending love and support.God Bless You and your loved ones always.
hey sam...dat was short yet so touchin'...so b'ful...
lovely!!!
AHH! THis is great! and sooo refreshing.. You do a great job penning things down....
Love the name Rahul, but you already kno that!!!
Love ya sis!
Ne
awwww:)So cute!
Lovely post with lots of love!
You definitely uplifted my gloom this morning.
Thank you, Sameera
:)
:) amazing!
:)
we always talk about happy endings...
its so much more fun to talk about the middle innings
ab tarif nahi karte teri mohabbat ki ae dost
kehte hai tutte dil ki dua se bhi nazar lag jati hai
sami, that was beautiful..! :) simply lovely! a mom's love to her child and a perfect couple! both i could see in this story! great 55 fiction!
ps: i LOVED it too!
pps: good thing Janu & you don't compete for such beautiful stories. i for one would never be able to decide which is better! :D
thats a wonderful feel good story ... :)
short n sweet...
nice last line!!!
Dear,
This is amazing.....Love this. Capsulated all emotions in few lines.
Aww.. very very cute :) how do you come up with such stories!
55 fiction is catching up with everyone I guess! Or was it you who started it??
yes yes i loved it dadimum.
it's as sweet as u :p no i think a lil less than u. :p ;)
P.S yes i did mention that i loved it.
PPS: no seriously here i mention that i still love it :p
@shrav,
it's me who started it. :p yesh i am mean when it comes to taking d credit. ;)
@dadimum,
i love u sooooooooo much
(((((angel)))))
a nice post.
keep writing.
TC
whaoooo... i am in love...
darn at 'their eyes made love'
i think i need a time out!!
Short n sweetSameera. very cute :)I likes the word “They lived happily ever after” & “yes they are”.Wishing you and Kabir will live happily ever after.:)
Hey Pooja!Nice to see you back :)
Thanks dear!
Thanks Ne dear!Yup I know too well :P
Love ya too Sis!
Thanks Meera :)
Glad I did Riversoul :)
Take care.
Thanks Vishesh :)
Exactly Mystique! :)
Lovely lines TPM,thanks :)
Thanks Vinay!Glad you were able to see it :)
P.S. Welcome to the club :P
P.P.S. Lol,I rarely write F3!
Thanks Hiren :)
Thanks Saim!
Thanks lot Jeeves dear :)
Lovely one, Sameera :)
wishes,
devika
Thanks Shrav!It sure is catching on like the plague :P
I wrote my first one last June.55 Fiction is in vogue since 1987,that's what Wiki says :)
Thanks Preeti dear :)
P.S. I know you loved it :P
P.P.S. Love you too Angel!
P.P.P.S. Take all the credit,I don't mind at all :D
Thanks Indrajit.I will :)
Lol Seher!
Thanks Jaishree dear,for liking it and the warm wishes :)
Thanks Devika :)
You picked strange time to blog. I am just an extraordinary person so I am sleeping at that time.
Lol!Then I guess I am extraordinary too :P
Thanks Sameera for your comments on my post.
I enjoyed your 55 words. You have a remarkable talent writing stories. I shall come back to visit and take a detailed look of your blog.
You are welcome :)
Thanks a lot!
cute!!
loved it!!
;-))
Thanks! :)
hey loved the way you ended this one :)
Thanks :)
Hi Sameera
This one was very sweet... left me with a smile :)
Thanks for reminding us the simple things in life again :)
OMG
this ones awesome... u know sam... this is exactly wt i want... in like another 10 yrs... wish i cud have it!!! :(
awwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!
sweet sweeter sweetest...
urs..hemu..
Thanks Mehreen and you are welcome :)
You will Div dear,trust me :)
@Mayz : :)
Thanks Hemanth :)
lovely.. :)
Thanks :)
wow! simple beautiful. these few lines brought me a moment to imagine. you sweet dear :)
Glad they did.Thanks dear :)
That is such a sweet scene. The daughter is lucky there is so much love between her parents.
Thank you.She is indeed :)
fairy tale was beautiful:-) I hope you haven't seen panchathanthiram - a tamil movie, you get to see the exact same scene in the climax:-)
Welcome here and thanks!I have heard of the movie,not seen it though :)
Awww, that's so sweet!
:)
Loved it Darl... Amazing as usual... U said an entire story with just a one line ending "and they lived happily ever after..." ... Love u loadz.... Ummu
Thanks Jaanu!Glad you liked it :)
Love you loads.Ummmmmmmmmmmmmma
beautiful!
Keshi.
Short yet a sweet tale.. Keep it up.. :)
Ain't that sweet !! :)
thats a lovely ending :)
so sweet :)
take care mate... cheers...
Thanks Keshi!
Welcome here Velusamy and thanks :)
@Adisha : :)
Thanks Arv :)
Romantic one.
I shud have read this before I go to sleep. It wud have given me sweet dreams. Mo probs. Will read it again before I go to bed.
Your comment made me smile.Thanks :)
Wow that was wonderful...kahani ankhon ke taro ki :)
Thanks :)
o m g.. seems like cupid is really active this season :) luvly!!
He he!Thanks :)
aww... this is the cutest thing ever!!!!! :-)
:)
aaawwww :)
someone's all mushy mushy :) ;)
I love such happily ever after endings:)
just the kind of feel good tale one seeks in times when going through mood swings.. loved the last line particularly... sweet.
ok .. i will be honest and considering you are aware how dumb I am ..
whats 55 fiction ..?
and on a more serious note .. I loved the expression "eyes made love" ... but the line rahul came to collect his wife threw me off .. as in din get it sorry .. its been a while am rusty ...
Happily Ever After....beautiful title and ending story.
What a new, Very Wonderful home you created!
Excellent job! Three column template, everything is clear and professional.
Congratulations!
My best wishes to you, dear Sameera!
I love the image.
Ya Divya,someone is,most of the time ;)
Me too Yasmeen :)
Welcome here Azoed and thanks!
Welcome back Sid!
You can read more about 55 Fiction here :
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/55_Fiction
As for your other doubt,read it over and you will understand :)
Thanks a lot Krystyna dear!I love the new look too :)
*Hugs*
Welcome here Meena.The pic is courtesy of deviantART.
tht was sweet!!! :)
Thanks :)
How lovely, Sameera!!! You have a great voice.
Hugs, JJ
Thanks dear :)
*Hugs*
awwwwww......so sweeet....seriously I mean it is sickeningly sweet but in a good way!!!!
The best 55 Fiction....ok maybe not the best...a close tie between you and Lena!! :P
Take Care
Thanks :)
Simple and beautiful. It stayed on with me for a while after reading. Best wishes and cheers!
Thanks buddy :)
hey.. u r 55 fic inspired me to try my hand at it.. do see my blog! wd be honored by u r comment!
Cool!Will check it out :)
so sweet :)
:)
All pink for the Valentine huh. Looks very nice.
Love.. very cute.
Breathtaking baby !
That was the bestest 55 fiction I have read ever !!
You're the greatest !
Awwwwww it's sooooooooooooooooooooo cute :-)
Loved this post! short and sweet!
Thanks Priya,pink is my all time favorite color :)
So nice to see you back here Cindy Babes! :)
Thanks sweetie.Muaaah
Thanks Akanksha dear!Why don't you try writing a 55 fiction too? :)
Sameera, I have an award for you on my blog. :-)
@Sameera
My new post is sure a work of fiction!Chk it out.
Thanks a lot Catherine,will check it out :)
Sure thing Akanksha!
aww.. lovely!
:)
Valentines air has caught up with you a bit early it would seem! :-D
May they live happily ever after! I am huge huge fan of animated movies... I love the happily-ever-after feeling!
Welcome here!Don't we all love happy endings? :)
It's not about V-Day,just felt like writing it,simple.
Yup,... but its kinda sad that most of the all time great love stories have had a sad ending! I love the ones that end on a happy note! I loved the feel of it... Nicely done, as always! :)
Hmmm,well reasoned.Thanks :)
:)
n thats my smiley..after a long time!!!!!!!
Hey!Welcome back :)
awwww adorably perfect :)
just the kinda things i dig.
special smiles @ "eyes made love"
:)
That was a wonderful post, and I somehow adore 55 fictions anyways. Still, it's been a while since I've seen one like this...
Blogrolling you...
Welcome here and thanks a lot! :)
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