From your first kiss that made me stretch
To those osculations after fervent prayer
I treasure each thoughtful & loving gesture
Wiser any day than the wisest soothsayer
When we were deemed to be by ourselves
You filled in best you could as a confidant
The meals might have lacked that smack
But love and effort were forever abundant
You made sure I did not miss out anything
In spite of lacking that pillar girls lean on so
Though we are at loggerheads all the while
Our bond is special, to those eyes that know
Tomorrow when the time comes to fly away
To my other home yonder, from our li'l nest
Never would I go away from you in thought
Grateful to Him I am for giving me the best
As you turn a new page in the book of life
My love and prayers are always with you
I am sorry for all those times I have hurt
But deep within love always shines anew
To those osculations after fervent prayer
I treasure each thoughtful & loving gesture
Wiser any day than the wisest soothsayer
When we were deemed to be by ourselves
You filled in best you could as a confidant
The meals might have lacked that smack
But love and effort were forever abundant
You made sure I did not miss out anything
In spite of lacking that pillar girls lean on so
Though we are at loggerheads all the while
Our bond is special, to those eyes that know
Tomorrow when the time comes to fly away
To my other home yonder, from our li'l nest
Never would I go away from you in thought
Grateful to Him I am for giving me the best
As you turn a new page in the book of life
My love and prayers are always with you
I am sorry for all those times I have hurt
But deep within love always shines anew
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@ sameera .. gracefully beautiful ...!!! thats the only thing i have to say about it ..
Thank you :)
absolutely wonderful!!
Thanks!
Sammy!! That was a wonderful Dedication to your daddy!!
Happy Birthday Daddy!!!
Ne!
words on fire :)
aaawwwwwwww so sweet sameera..!! its so beautiful n heart warming :))
Happy Birthday to ur dad...it was awesome sami...loved the whole thing..
***You made sure I did not miss out anything
this line got me for some time...:)...nice write up..
urs..hemu..
Aaw....thats so so cute!!
One problem..-please cn the text color be made darker?
It sorta merges with the background,and its tough to read your stuff :(
So touching!! My wishes too! :)
And hey, I like the way you "dress up" your blog. It's unique!
Manoj
hey this was lovely..
such a sweet little poem,u really defy ur own genre!
treasured words...happy birthday to him...
As you turn a new page in the book of life
My love and prayers are always with you
I am sorry for all those times I have hurt
But deep within love always shines anew
loved it...its marvellous...it stands out from the rest of ur poems i think...
:) lovely words :) happy birthday to ur dad :)
Wow…a sweet dedication..!!
~~The meals might have lacked the smack
But love and effort were forever abundant~~
In best form..!!the efforts is something normally people do miss..!!
~~You made sure I did not miss anything
In spite of lacking that pillar girls lean on~~
I can sense a tincture of pain over there..but then the best part is already conveyed in the first line…
Cheers girl..!!
:)
Beautiful.
***deep within love always shines anew.
***Our bond is special, to those eyes that know
Very true.
a beautiful dedication ..all dads deserve it ..as much as our moms do
Check out your award.ppleeej :)
absolutely amazing, sweetheart!
no matter how tough times were and will be, your father is the one who will always be with you, after all family is one of very few things that really matter in the long run.
Happy birthday to him!! :)
Love and hugs to you, dumbi!! :)
u r the best daughter in bloggerville :P :P lol
cake is just ok by the way...not so tempting :P the true color of chocolate is missing :D
love u moti :-*
absolutely beautiful!!
Awww thank you Ne Darling!Will surely wish him from you :)
Muaaah
Not really Vikram.
Thanks Trinaa dear :)
Thank you so much Hemanth :)
Thanks Aayushi.Girl,the background for the posts is black,I guess the full template didn't load!Thanks,will check it out.
Thanks Manoj!How have you been?
He he,thanks again.I love dressing it up! :)
Thanks Rambler.
Thanks Anwesa.I just write according to the mood!
Thanks Vinay :)
I don't know about the standing out factor,glad you liked it!
Thanks Vishesh :)
Thanks Vinz!You sensed right :)
Cheers!
Thanks Aneesh.
Thanks Farah.Yes they do!
Thanks Lena sweetu!Yes dear,very true.I have realized that fact over time.
Will wish him from you :)
Love you loads.Hugsss
Thanks Div Baby! :)
Lol,chalo aise hi sochke dil behlale - sour grapes,sour cake rather :P
Love U too sweetie!Ummma
Welcome here Mayuri and thanks!
hey hey...wooo...coool mate...absolutely luvly...!!!
btw seems de blog's loadin slower now... :-(
Lol it's you!Was wondering who is this new person :P
Thanks buddy!Well it never loaded that fast any day,thanks to my templates and widgets :)
warmth.. nostalgia..
:)
happy birthday! :)
:)
Thank you dear!
that cho chweet!!
Thanks!
So touching!!a beautiful dedication ..convey my birthday wishes to dad.
beautiful dedication!
my wishes to ur dad!
ammu.
Thank you Jaishree dear! :)
Thanks Ammu! :)
"HAPPY BIRTHDAY , TO YOUR DADDY"
as usual it touched me real deep.
maybe because i am very close to my dad. till i completed graduation i woke him up at night whenever i had a pee urge...
when i cry he cries...even today...
i love him with all my heart and soul...
THANK YOU SAMEERA, sweetie
for this wonderful post...
Thank you dear!
Awww that's so cute.I can imagine the bond you both share.God Bless!
You are always welcome :)
hi da.. this is so touching... so sweet of you... did your Dad get to see it yet?
Happy Birthday to him :)
Have a nice evening, you two... cheers...
Thanks buddy!Yes I showed him in the evening.He was very happy and told me to thank all friends who wished him :)
hey sami, read ur reply to my comment...!!
of course u dont know the standout factor, its readers who can tell...and me, i happen to be one of them...! i do seriously think this is yur best so far...!!
When I re-read my posts once in a while,I do see some which stand out more than the others.But I don't compare my work,be it within my own blog,or with that of others.Every post of mine is special to me in its own way,and I guess it's the same for many writers :)
So beautiful and poignant.
Thank you :)
oh...i didn't think like that...even me, i dont compare my works...! looking forward to more posts that are special to u...and may u always write such brilliant works...!!
bye...!!
Thanks!Take care.
have u seen that advert... My Daddy Strongest" ??
:kissssssssssss
papa ki pyaari beti...Did I tell you that you aren't only the best poet I know but the best friend, the best girl and the best daughter too...
I have nothing to say..except for two things...
Loved
//the food might have lacked the smack
and
//the pillars girls lean on
(you rock gurl! And so does the lucky people who love you :P)
>:D<
Wish him loads of health and happiness from my side too...
awww :)
damn sweet of you sameera..
happy birthday to him :)
He he,yes Samby!Kisi tel ka ad tha na :)
Awww Sachi sweetheart,your comment really had me in tears.Thank you so much dear,you rock too!Your love shows in your words and deeds always.Wish kar diya.He said thanks and God Bless!
Love you babes.Muaaaaah :)
Divya,thanks a lot dear :)
Very sweet of you and my belated wishes to him.
Thanks dear! :)
In spite of lacking that pillar girls lean on so... which?
To my other home yonder, from our li'l nest-- beautiful :)
overall a nice poem, and the end is quite good actually.. love always shine anew, as paulo say, no matter how many times you fall in love. It is always brand new! with new circumstances, new choices, new experiances!
It sure is...
O such a sweet poem on Dad's birthday :) Your dad must be so proud of you sameera :).
I wish him best of health.
Really Sameera,
Love Always Shine.
You speak with love in your heart
and your words are blessed!
Happy Birthday to your great Dad!
May this day and every day after be pleasant for Him.
Did you make this yummy and beautiful Birthday cake?
Lovely *smiles*
A heartfelt bday verse!
Happy Bday to Sameera's dad!
Hope u 2 had a blast!
*HUGZ* :)
Keshi.
english language is rich , yet der r times wen u hv nly a word 2 say & dat is beautiful & de tim is wen wen u come across works lik urs...my belated wishes 2 ur dad dear!
Sameera- Love the flow. Wishes to Daddy on my behalf
Wonderful verses sweety !!!
And wo cake par icing tu ki hai na ? Scribbled pink letters....
:)
Damn cute !!
Belated bday wishes to uncle from me too.
nice one ....loved it
Wow, stunning! Your Dad's gonna absolutely love this. Happy birthday to him!
Thats like a really sweet and cute Daddy's gal.Loved the poem.Hope he liked the beautiful cake....
Great shot
Confessions! Confessions! Confessions of a young lil daughter.. lol... Nice post darl. Hope ur dad liked it. Ummmmaa
what a beautiful thought expressed so well..wonderful
Belated Happy Birthday
Such a sweet sentiment. :)
Welcome here A and thanks.
The pillar here refers to mother.And this poem was not about falling in love,but about a father and daughter's relationship.The pic and labels say it all.
Thank you Yasmeen dear! :)
Thank you so much Krystyna dear!No I did not make it,got it from a bakery :)
Thanks Hope :)
Thanks Keshi Darling!We had a nice day together :)
*HUGS*
Awww such a sweet thing to say Enchanted Illusionz!Thank you dear :)
Thanks Jeeves dear :)
Thanks Cindy Babes!No,I got the guy at the bakery to do it,coincidentally he happened to have only pink icing :)
Welcome here Neelam and thanks.
Thanks Mahi dear!He was very happy :)
Welcome here and thanks Chaggoholic!He liked both :)
Welcome here Roentarre and thanks.
Ya ya,call it what you want Dumbu!Thanks Jaan,you know he liked it na :)
Love you.Ummma!
Thanks Lakshmi :)
Thanks Hobo!
Thank you Jason :)
hapy buday to ur dady
so cute..
lovely.
Thanks dear :)
Sameera, what beautiful birthday prose for your father. You have one lucky daddy. :D He must be sooooo proud of you!!!
Hugs, JJ
Your father already has a wonderful gift in such a daughter! :) It sounds like you two share a rare, and unwavering, bond. This poem is a testament to you both.
And the cake looks yummy! :)
Sammyyyyyy - so cute re... thts y u not online today???
hope u had fun...EJNAYYYYYY!!!
Awww thank you so much Nancy dear! :)
*HUGS*
Thank you so much Sarah dear.Oh we bicker a lot though!
I finished it off today,he had just a small piece when I made him cut it :P
Thanks Div dear!Arey nahi re,his birthday was yesterday-7th!
I was just doing some stuff :)
Glad to hear that Sameera :)
twas also Fathers Day on Sunday 7th of Sept here in Aus.
Keshi.
i loved this one...totally!!!!
i miss my daddy :(
The first stanza is absolutely adorable. Beautiful imagery. A very nice dedication to your Dad!
"As you turn a new page in the book of life..." I wasn't too sure what that could have meant. I thought of retirement(sorry) but reading a comment or two here clarified the matter.
So..
My best wishes to your Dad on his birthday. I'm sure he's proud of his Sameera.:)
Oh really Keshi?That's great,so apt :)
Thanks Mayz.Awww!
Thank you so much Celine dear.Awww how sweet of you to say that :)
Glad if your dad got this lovely message. Love shared from heart always shines; the best parts are last two verses :)
Thanks buddy!Yes of course he read it,and was very happy :)
Happy birthday to your dad.
Thank you :)
samiiii..de award season is nt yet over, come & get urs dear
Ok will do,thanks!
Fantastic... I loved the way you have woven words into a piece of poetry.
Hi, I am Kartz. Siddharth (Descrying the Shadows) directed me here, and I am glad he did...
Welcome here and thank you so much!
Oh okie,sweet of him :)
beautiful dedication :)
happy birthday to uncle!
Thanks sweetie! :)
Sameera, you have moved some entries to the top? and how did I missed this one? I am so sorry, this is coming really late from me...
Happy Birthday Uncle!
No dear,I did not.I have just been posting!
It's ok dear,what matters is the thought.Thanks sweetie :)
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