Sunday, September 28, 2008

Fifth Haiku


Autumn hues color

Two hearts beating together

Awaiting union


*Image Friends Will Be Friends by nensha

144 Footnotes:

Pooja said...

;)

lovely!!!

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks! :)

WarmSunshine said...

really sweet.. short but effective :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks :)

mayz said...

ahhh...cute :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks :)

RiverSoul said...

The portent of those few words, the anticipation, its enormous.
Well done, Sameera.
:)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks a lot! :)

Trinaa said...

choo chweet!!

vishesh said...

wow! well put :D

ANWESA said...

de will meet soon!!

Preeti said...

looooooooooved the template...
amazing...

and you have written such a sweet thing.
short and pretty.

:-)

Jeeves said...

Cute ")

Hemanth Potluri said...

did sneha tell u to make it short and sweet aa..:P....but nicely done sami..loved it :)..

urs..hemu..

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Trinaa dear!

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Vishesh!

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Anwesa dear :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Preeti :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Jeeves :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Hemanth!This is a Japanese style of poetry,as is obvious from the title.You can check out the rules to write one in my first Haiku post.

¢яŷştąŁ said...

Oh wow!!

Really cute,Sam!!
Muah

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks sweetie!Muaaah

:-) said...

wow.. tatzz beautiful.. :-) for sum reason i find haikus,, tough to crack but u made it look so simple.. :-)

da pic is cute n simply compliments ur words.. gud one,, Sameera.. :-)

•♥•♥Vicky♥•♥• said...

:D
something different eh..?

Divya said...

1. i LOVED the pic of the cat and the dog... AAAWWWWWWsome :)

2. i LOVE your dis pic!

3. that was sweet.. hmmm.. what's cooking? ;)

Rambler said...

a very vibrant one..

Farah Deen said...

short, cute, sweet and romantic!

Art and Poetry said...

It's a nice haiku! goes well with the drawing of the two cats.

descrying the shadows said...

you now what's special about a moment we wait for so long ...???
the fact that we WAIT for it...
:)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Hey :-),thanks dear!Really?I am sure you would write beautiful ones.Would love to see a haiku by you sometime :)

I love the pic too!

Vinz aka Vinu said...

short and sweet..!!

:)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

I write Haikus once in a blue moon bro.As the title says,it's my fifth one :P

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Hey Divya!

1.I love the cat & dog pic too! :)

2.Thanks dear *blush blush*

3.He he,keep guessing :P

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Rambler!

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Farah dear :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Art & Poetry!It's a cat and dog actually :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Indeed Sid!Well said dear :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Vinz! :)

deepsat said...

heart warmers!! ;-))

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

:)

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

very nice work! :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks! :)

Priya Joyce said...

Ah!

poetry is always said to be an art of playing with words. But u can write it without much words also.
Those lines have a deep meaning out there.. very deep!!

Sach! said...

yea! Awaiting unionn ;)

Sach! said...

btw...howz u?
See am studying hard :) Have my exams this mornin' (college 1's)..will be o/n on Oct 02's evening! You'll be o/l na then?
Miss ya..

Keshi said...

sweet!

Keshi.

CALM B4 THE STORM said...

WOW! Autumn already?? It gave a really warm feeling and welcome for it!

Nice work!

ceedy said...

Kaiku itna mast Haiku likha :P

Sorry but am in the mood - hope their blood groups matched :)

Kartz said...

:) Sweet...

Cinderella. said...

Lovely lines dear - the way you've transcended the whole flow of emotions from the first word to the last is just lovely !!

muah

Chaggoholic.... said...

Hey amazin sweet nothing after the imaginative super burst on the last one. Loved the cuteness....

Vinay said...

beautiful... 3 lines of passion...!! :)

Vinay said...

oh and nice profile pic too...!! didn't notice it b4...

Absolute Vanilla (and Atyllah) said...

Aah, that's gorgeous. I do so love haiku!

Me Mini Mini Mouse said...

Awwwwww.... kinna cuweeeeet hai!!!!

muah...i am lurving it...LOL

Diana said...

Just three lines and love explained in a brilliant way.

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Priya dear!Why don't you write a Haiku sometime?It's quite easy :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Sachi sweetie!Muaaaaaaaaaah

Missing you too dear.Good girl,ache se padke exam dena!See you soon,yes I will be online :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Keshi!

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Yes Ne,it's started here!Thanks sis.Love ya! :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Lol Ceedy,koi aur post likhne ka mann nahi tha,isliye :P

He he,they don't but the transplant was accepted ;)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Kartz :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Cindy Babes! :)

Muaaah

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Chaggoholic!The previous post was a real conversation,not imagined :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks and thanks Vinay!

Why don't you write a Haiku too sometime? :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Nicky dear!

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Div Babes! :)

Muaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks a lot Diana :)

Ravisekharan said...

dat was cool sam!!


Cheers,
Ravi..

Priya said...

Somebody wants the days to go faster now...

Arv said...

May that day be upon you soon :)

lovely haiku.. loved the colours on it...

take care...

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Ravi!

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Priya,you know too much dear :P

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks a lot Arv :)

Cheers!

S.A.M.B.I.T said...

nice..n beautiful''
by the way do u know HTML..
can u help me improving my site??????

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thank you.

jason evans said...

Very beautiful. :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thank you :)

Vandita said...

:) cute

krystyna said...

Love ....

Thank you Sameera!

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Vands :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

You are always welcome Krystyna dear :)

comfortably numb said...

thts profound:)

Mel Avila Alarilla said...

I'm almost tempted to say who the two hearts are. But I know that they are meant for each other and the day will come when they will be united as one and the blissful union shall have been consummated. May it happen in the foreseeable future. Thanks for the exquisite poem of love and expectations. God bless you always my dear friend in love.

Yasmeen said...

Like your new pose:)
Well written poetess, just 3 lines ,enough to express so many thoughts. Beautiful:)

The Lover said...

short and sweet. bful!

hope said...

aah! lovely :)

btw when the longing gonna end for these two hearts ;P

and thanks a lot girl.. hugz..

Keshi said...

Sameera I just came to tell ya that u look really beautiful in this pic! ur face resonates calm, quiet and peace. HUGS!


Keshi.

enchanted illusionz said...

ws wondering wot haiku is ..cam 2 knw aftr reading oter comments..

jus 10 words & u make ppl go awwww!! really chweett babes.
& hey luvly pic too

Beauty and the BEast said...

BEautiful!

Tempting...

...and lovely

Aneesh said...

Nice!!!!

Happy Ramzan
:)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Saim :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Awww Mel,thank you so much my dear friend.Your kind words and heartfelt blessings mean a lot to me.Hopefully there will be a prologue to the union before this year ends,keeping my fingers crossed.

Take care.God Bless You and your loved ones always.

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks and thanks Yasmeen dear! :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Aditya!

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Hope!He he,hopefully next year ;)

Awww,you are always welcome sweetie!Hugsss

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Awww thanks a lot Keshi dear! :)

*HUGS*

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks & thanks Enchanted Illusionz!

Yup just seventeen syllables totally.Why don't you try it sometime? :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Welcome here Beauty And The Beast and thanks!

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Hey thanks Aneesh! :)

Nature Nut /JJ Loch said...

Beautiful imagery and photo, Sameera. You have such a beautiful soul. I know a white light surrounds you. :D

Hugs, JJ

Swati said...

awwww :) :)

and what happened to the pic u put on the blog page??

Ropi said...

Well my soul is alone at the moment. :P

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Awww thanks a lot Nancy dear!How sweet of you :)

*HUGS*

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Swati :)

Kaun sa pic,you mean profile ka?

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Lol Stephen,I am sure it will not be the same always :P

Swati said...

oi!!
eid mubarak! :D

Jeevan said...

Happy Ramzan wishes dear :)

Lena said...

i dont remember being that much late ever... grrrrrrrrrrrrrr

I wondered if the haikus will ever be back here :P And so they are.. thats amazing how few words can reflect deep emotions when in the hands of the master.

Awesome, dear! :)

Think Tank said...

bows to you lady ..perhaps there hearts will meet like that of the one legged tin soldier and the dancing paper girl ..melted into one

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Hey Swati!Thanks dear :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Jeevan,thanks a lot buddy! :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

It's ok Lena dear!

Of course they will always be coming back here now and then.Thanks Dumbitoo :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Awww Farah,thanks a lot!So sweet of you dear :)

Hemanth Potluri said...

good template sami..it matched the awareness tag u have placed good..:)

urs..hemu..

Hemanth Potluri said...

and the name template queen surely matches u :)..lol..

urs..hemu..

Mahi said...

aww absolutely cute! such an apt pic too:)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Hemanth!Yes I changed the background in accordance with the message :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Mahi dear! :)

Adi said...

hello! I'm adi and I came thru Meghna's blog.
Sorry... I'm not quite into haikus, but i sure did understand a bit of that. School's taught me one or two haikus, but thats not enough.
well... all right. I did not understand it at all! Soooooo sorry...... :(
Plz dont take it in any bad sense. Well, you can't expect much from a tiny 13 year old, can you? Maybe later, i may get to know the meaning. All those comments do tell me that the haiku is a great one.... maybe i'll ask someone. As soon as i get to know the meaning, i'll comment again. Promise. :). U've got a cute blog..
Thanx

Adi

Sarah Hina said...

Tonight, this reaches deep.

Lovely moment, Sameera.

preeti said...

:)visiting first time :) and I am not regretting:) wonderful kick start to my day with such a beautiful thought which nothing but radiates positivity :)

preeti said...

I wanna blogroll you. Visit my blog, and drop a comment if you are okay with it :)

Anindita said...

These three lines, have made me grin ear to ear today! Thank you for making my day!!! :)

k.ø.c.h.ü said...

hey...cuteeeeeeeeee....n yupp...ma tails on fire...too busy dese days...will b bak soon...!!! n hey...b ready wid sum real super cool posts 4 me !!!!

Trinaa said...

eid mubarak ji!!

MAN IN PAINTING said...

wonderful!
best wishes..
me too have a new one
Mip

Pooja said...

visit me at http://smilestearslife.blogspot.com/

new blog!!

ROSA E OLIVIER said...

"love is the one who masters all things."

Mawlãnã Rumi...for you...

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Welcome here Adi and thanks a lot! :)

It's ok dear,glad you liked the Haiku and my blog.Will visit you soon.Btw,you can read how to write a Haiku here :

http://desiduck.blogspot.com/2007/11/my-first-haiku.html

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Sarah dear :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Welcome here Preeti and thanks a lot!Why would I mind being blogrolled?Lol!Will surely visit you anyway :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Anindita! :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Nithin!Lol,I will not be blogging much this month.Anyways,see you around :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks Trinaa darling! :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks MIP!

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Sure I will Pooja! :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Well said Rosa.Thanks!

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

its sooooooooooooo romantic.

i am lost in my dreamworld now :P

pic bhi bahut cute hai. :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks sweetypie! :)

indicaspecies said...

May your life be as beautiful and colorful as the autumn hues.:)

Purva said...

aww awesome!! somethings are better terse than said in a thousand words!

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Thanks a lot Celine :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Welcome here and thanks a lot Purva!

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