She beheld him, the lust glinting in her eyes, knowing too well he was a forbidden pleasure. The bonds of restraint seemed to be giving way, its curtails drawing apart. All she could think was desire, all that she could see was his perfection, as he sat there, robed in the finest attire. He was the most delectable of all she had ever tasted.The sabbatical had taken its toll on her, it was evident from the pallor of her cheeks and the depth of her clavicles. Lord how she had missed him! Nothing more did she want right now than to fulfill her senses with his radiating appeal, to be one with him. He intoxicated her, driving her insane. She had tried to be away, but today she was sapless and so vulnerable to him. And that feeling was something she was eternally willing to give into.
As she approached him, she moistened her lips, the heat of her fervor acutely palpable. He made no protest as she undressed him, taking in his breathtaking beauty with her hungry eyes. Her fingers played with his perfect curves, stroking gently, admiring. She could wait no more, she had waited too long. As she took him in, she moaned with delight. He completed her, and that moment, she was whole again. Ah the joy of savoring fine chocolate after abstinence! ;)
*Image Lips by The Dancing Queen




















114 Footnotes:
Enjoy !
I always do that.This was fictional!
Nice :)
there was an inkling tht something like the last line will pop up :P
Lol!Thanks :)
Ahem..!! ;P
good good.. keep eating :P
lol i knew it was about chocolate :D
But great written dear! Good job, dumbi :)
hehehe...i read the last two lines first :P :P
I shud say drenched in sweetness of that taste.
lol i had two chocolates today...now i want more ....! :)
I never stopped Hope,that girl was fictional! :P
You know too much Dumbitoo! :X
Thanks sweetu.Hugsss :)
Typical of you Div!
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm yes Priya! :)
We can never have enough of them Vishesh,can we? :P
hmmm... apart from the teaser...it still was a very very graceful description of a sensual feeling .. be it for a choc. or not .. :P
:)
tht was full of lust...
reminded me of the joke that did rounds in my college days...
whats that very hard, brown in color girls die to have it in..?? phew.!!
and i thought it was a continuation from your last post.
your write up made me think dirty..
well written gurhll.. !!
:)
Thanks Siddharth!I know this is my boldest post ever :)
somehow I anticipated a twist in the tale :)
Lols Vinz!I know the innuendos here were very lusty,not the way I usually write.Was just experimenting :)
Thanks,glad you liked the post!
Hahaha..Kinda guessed this. Nice one
yeah..after going thru many of ur blogs i realised this one was bold enough.. great try..!!
:)
Nice ha!
Chocolates..mmmmm..;)
chocolates... yuuuuuuummmmmmm :))
He he you know my writing too well Rambler :)
Thanks Jeeves!
He he,thanks Vinz! :)
Yup Aayushi!Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ;)
Yup Trinaa!Yummy yum :)
Nice... :)
Thanks :)
yummy...lolz...
chocolate romance...?? in real life too sami?? ;)
ps: cat is back...second series... do comment...
ahhh !!
gud one ...tho kinda predictable but ...nicely written ..!!!
Aaaaaaargghh....gilr this is so not you !!!
This is someone else...duh !!!!
I was in a twin boat - one thinking - yes this is true no rain checks, and on the other - it was she is gonna do smth in the end !!!
And you won you jerk you won !!!!!
muaaah,
MMM!!
No comments :)
somehow i KNEW it! :)
Charm and grace.. two words for your blog.. this one on getting together was cool.. go on.. i like what you have written.. do post me when you blog next..
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what a choclaty post!!!
i knew there would be a funny ending to this but did not think of chocolate:)
they say having chocolate is almost as similar as having "u know what" hahhahaaa
eiiiihiiiihiiihihihih
Wts with u sam...i am tryin to diet n u talkin only bout chocos today!!!!
Sameera, I bet you could sell romance fiction to Harlequin. Are you going to give it a try?
Great work!!!
Hugs, JJ
Lols!Somethings are not meant to be revealed Vinay ;)
Checked the post and liked it :)
Thanks Peter!
Lol Cindy Babes!Am so glad I got you :P
As I told you,was just diversifying my literary horizons ;)
Muaaaaaaaaah
Lol Aneesh,no issues :)
Not that hard given I don't write sensual stuff Busy Writer :P
Welcome here Tiger and thanks.Getting together,are you referring to this post or the previous one?
I always visit new visitors,so no issues there :)
He he glad to know it kept you guessing Anamika :)
Ya have heard about it,but I think I would prefer chocolate any day ;)
He he Div,yeh to pehle likha tha sweetie!Pata nahi kyun,was more lusty than ever for chocs today :P
You really motivate me Nancy dear!Will surely think about it :)
*Hugs*
My word gal!! LOL!!
I guess all of us had a dirty kind of mind reading this! LOL! I was like wow! a romance post!!
Hey but Chocolate is the best cure for anything!!! Except Shopping!!
Man!Shower time! hahahahahahaha!
Ne.
Lol!I was kinda unsure to post this or not,but then thought it's about chocolate after all,so why ever not :)
You bet!It's the most divine cure ever.
Ha ha ha,happy showering :P
lol.....heheh chocos...yummy...
urs..hemu..
loved to read it...
Sameera this reminded of a post I did a while back on COFFEE. It sounded so very 'adult' and alot of ppl thought I was writing abt my BF. *rolling eyes* hahahaha!
Nice one...YUMMMMMMMMMMY!
Keshi.
For a while I thought that you just transformed into a mature writer writing about erotic desires. Thanks goodness it was just a gustatory experience of a chocolate bar after a long abstinence from it. Well, you really had a way with words my friend. You really got me there anticipating a climax of an erotic story but thanks goodness, you're still wholesome, the way I really wanted you to be. Thanks for the different style of story telling. You can't imagine how relieved I was with the sudden twist of an ending. God bless you always my dear friend.
OMG..!! tat was one heck of a post, have to confess had my mind runnin into al sorts of things.. lol..liked d way u wrote n d end..OMG.. icin on d cake n a delight especially cozz i luvvvv chocolates.. :-)
Read ur other post "In Luv Again" as well..m glad i did read.. :-)
LOL... any chocolate or was it a toblerone special??? :p
LOLOL good one
i have written something exactly similar long back...
did you read that one of mine?
Yup they are so yummy any day Hemanth! :)
Thanks Keshi Babes,I just thought of trying something different :P
Did you?I searched your archives(so tired now),couldn't find it.Which month/year was it?I wanna read! :)
Yummy indeed!Isn't chocolate such a yummy sin? ;)
Lol Mel,I knew your were going to be really surprised reading this,and I am not disappointed by your reaction,he he :)
I usually keep away from writing erotic stuff 'cause they are not really my cup of tea.But then we are mostly adults here,and maturity doesn't necessarily have to be shown only by writing bold posts.It's all in the mind!
Glad you enjoyed this post my friend.Don't you worry,I will always remain wholesome.God Bless You and your loved ones always.
Welcome here :-) and thanks!Glad you liked both the posts :)
Lol Arv,I was thinking more on terms of Ferrero Rocher as I wrote this :P
Thanks Burf.Did you?I read the 2 most recent posts of yours yesterday,that's it.
hahaha! i kinda expected the twist at the end... but yep very well written... and the feeling of having chocolate after a long long period of self restraint... wow!!!! pretty much what u've described... clap clap!
and hey! i was reminded of ferrero rocher too... wow what a sweet temptation that is :P
hehe this was way too good! :D
mmm
LOL! Oh you (chocolatey) saucy thing, you! ;-)
hahaha I thought so you were coming to something and not what I was thinking! LOL very well crafted story! :) I guess, the satisfaction of chocolate is huge huh? LOL LOL
intelligent.VERY.intelligent.
And yes,I love the fact that there are others beside me who are doing twists in the tail!!:)
good stuff!!
Scribblers Inc.
are choclates "males" in general or is it this specific choclate dressed in cool robe a male ... :)
and why the abstinence in first place when HE is so easy to lay hands on :) ... dieting blues?
nicely written :)
Thanks Divya!I have never really abstained from it,and if I ever do,I don't think I would be so patient like her :P
Yup!FR is one of the best chocolates ever :)
Thanks Vands!Mmmm ;)
Lol!Thanks Nicky dear :)
Lol got you there Farah,didn't I? ;)
Chocolate is like a lifeline for me.A friend of mine says if my veins were cut open,one would find chocolate running in them :P
Thanks Scribblers!I love giving twists to tales,that's evident in my short stories :)
Lol Hiren!I made the choc here male only cause the protagonist is a girl :P
This is a totally fictional piece,I could never abstain from them,whichever gender they belong to :)
choclate is a Aphrodisiac.. u wrote this psot after eating choclate eh?? getting a bolder that ur usual all of a sudden...LOL.
Yup I know it is :P
Lol aisa kuch nahi hai,I always keep having them,at least one a day is a must to survive :)
omg! i thought...
aanyway, i love him too and makes me feel like i am a woman...i miss him so well. for 2 weeks now!
Ha ha!
Indeed,we would be so incomplete without him won't we?Two weeks - you have major self control lady! :)
You are very creative writer, Sameera. I have always great time reading your arts. This is very sensitive and you use your imagination in a very realistic picture.
So yoummy, thanks!!!
hmmmm....I understand the dilemma but I guess you can interpret it in both ways...so couples can say best which is the best chocolate...anyway ultimately both ways the satisfaction is the last word...I have read a similar post on the theme of a dental surgery comparing it to...I guess you understand....lovely!
i read the label first!! damn! :(
never ever label such posts again!! :P
Sameera, I hope when you cut your fingers, your blood will be red and not brown. hhahahahaahah
I am a chocolate lover too, but I only love milk chocolate and it should be plain- no nuts nothing.
Who doesnt love chocolates right? :)
http://burfe.blogspot.com/
2007/08/she-was-hot.html
do tell me how did you like it
Chocklate?
Ha ha ha.
Lol.
You really got me back there.
:)
:)
Wonderfully creative and incredibly unconventional post.
:)
Keep writing.
Hehe....I am sure that she completed him....lolzzzzzzzzzz....liked the way the things flew..:)
yummmyyyyyy...now i definately need to satisfy my 'chocolaty' need :D...
:)
Thanks Krystyna dear!Glad you enjoyed this post :)
Lol Kalyan!I guess it must be so.Yes I have read that dental wala thing as an sms fwd :)
That's your fault Swati! :P
Labels are a must for me to sort my posts :)
Lol Farah!I don't mind if it's brown too :P
I can eat all kinds of chocolate except for ones with coconut,like Bounty.
Lol glad you were surprised Riversoul!Thanks :)
He he,thanks Gagan! :)
Lol!You should never delay it Mads dear ;)
Ok Burf,will do.
Hey...i'll call that 'BOLD'...! Hmmm...bravo
Thanks buddy!
the last line was a crusho.. keep posting man.. good sameera
Thanks!I will :)
Hey you are tagged.
:)
If you've already done this one,
Do send me the link:)
:)
I was just reading your blog and about to give you the link! :)
I hope the chocolate had six packs :P and it did melt her passion :)
damn damn
Lol!Physical attributes are not applicable when it comes to chocolate :P
Kudos Sameera,
I have always envisioned chocolate as a female figure, and you proved me wrong. It could never have been.
I would always remember this blog each time I eat a chocolate from now on.
P.S. Why was the abstinence? Calorie consciousness?
Welcome here and thanks!Nice to know my blog is going to be connected with your chocolatey pursuits in the future ;)
It's a purely fictional piece,the reason for her abstinence is up to you to keep guessing :P
Ahhhhhhhhh!
Really good one i must say!
So passionately described,
yet finally it was like a burst of a bubble!
:)
Nice one
jk...
He he!Thanks a lot :)
heeee,,
i didn't guess..
n i'm glad i didn't, cos my tongue had an orgy!
blissss...
Lol! :P
Mmmmmm bliss indeed :)
Very creative and the way u connected ;) lack to think first where it leads.
He he thanks buddy!That was exactly my intention :P
ha ha ha...
the build-up was so good...
i confess i read the ending...
i couldnt wait...
Lol okie! :)
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