He still admired her beauty
She still had those memories
"I want to marry you", he said
Her heart skipped a beat
She would have given anything
To hear those words back then
Now they meant nothing
Her angel had given her life
When he had just thrown her away
Silence was all that remained...
She still had those memories
"I want to marry you", he said
Her heart skipped a beat
She would have given anything
To hear those words back then
Now they meant nothing
Her angel had given her life
When he had just thrown her away
Silence was all that remained...
*This 55 Fiction (story in fifty five words) was inspired by Celine, who had written about it a few days back here.
NOTE : The Equal A Sequel Contest is on till June 9th, so do keep sending in your entries folks!
*Image Too Late by eternalfullmoon
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Nicely summarised in 55 words hun. Well done!
Keshi.
beautifully written :-)
oh! tht was really touching!
more like a poem, sweetu, but what less can we expect from Sami :)
you accomplished the task successfully.. just 55 words and so much said.
Great work dear!
love you :)
ahhhh.... beautiful...!
beautiful indeed... i didnt feel the pain a bit. the angel has guided me out of that to... :)
p.s- i apologise for makin a disappearing act. but now moi back!
""Her angel had given her life
When he had just thrown her away"
very nice lines
Deep thoughts...
Yes Priya,inspired from life!
Thanks Rambler!
Thanks Keshi Babes! :)
Thanks Raaji :)
Lena sweetu,you know I just need a chance to write poetry ;)
Thanks dearie.Love you loads.Hugsss!
Welcome here Mahi and thanks!
Hey Casper!Welcome back :)
Thanks a lot.Am glad you didn't feel the pain!
they rightly say that
"brievty is the wit of soul"
hence writing in few words is more challenging and i liked your poem too much , it is very touchy:)
Thanks a lot dear!Glad you liked it :)
wow! it is very similar to what i wrote yesterday :)
wow!! Compact summarised nicely in just 55 words..amazing!
Really nice my dear.
p/s Glad to know you'd settled..looking forward for more postings!Muahhs.
I just checked it out Vishesh,it's not really that similar cause yours is fiction and mine is based on experience :)
Glad you liked it Noushy sweetie!Sure I will keep posting :)
Loads of hugs & kisses!
Beautiful imagery!!! It's not easy fitting all those emotions into 55 words. Beautiful prose.
Hugs, JJ
Welcome to my space and thanks so much dear! :)
Life is Beautiful when angel with us. Fiction in 55 words! new effort dear :)
wowie... am back... and you know one thing .. tomorrow u will be blogrolled... the date is june 7, 2008.. it reads 6-7-8 (m-d-y)
Girl this reminded me of the song, "too late top apologise..." by One republic. Isse sunna zaroor !
And btw, since you wont go to read the message I left for you I thought of getting it where you will. :)
**Blogger : Sameera
Link : desiduck.blogspot.com
Message : I think she's my virtual sister. I love her way of putting thoughts into subtle little words, and paint feelings within. A brilliant poet. A brilliant fren. She's basically the girl-next-door you'd love to know and have around. Muaah sweets. Love you.
Drink : I dunno. I'll ask her.
Date : Mmm...a full day together, with shopping, lunching, long drives, laughing, chatting...you know,that kinda thing.**
Just 55 words and they convey volumes. Well done! To know it's based on real life makes it more touching. Thank you for the link here Sameera, and looking forward to more such posts.:)
Thanks for the visit, Sameera. This is my first visit here - some great work.
I see some familiar faces here, especially Celine.
Hello David,thanks!
Actually this is your third visit here :)
Cindy sweets,that's a top fav song of mine,thanks to your Jij who had made me listen to it first!
Awwwww that's so sweet!I feel the same about you dearie!Muaaah
Btw,to fill in the blanks,favorite drink is orange juice :)
May we have that "date" one day,maybe next time I come to India!
Thanks so much darling,means a lot to me.Love ya.Hugsssss
He he,thanks Chriz!And am gonna do the same,but late by a day :)
Thanks Celine,it's cause of you I got motivated to try it :)
Yes Jeevan,it is and I am thankful for it!Maybe you could try it too sometime :)
55 words- grt thought packed in..
:)leaves me wanting some more:)
Ha ha thanks! :)
hey gr8 writing.. pretty heavy stuff..liked it a lot tho... really well written..
btw chk out my blog when u can... cio round
Welcome here and thanks a lot! :)
Nice poem however it contains too much feelings to me.
Lol!Am sure about that :)
Thanks btw!
now he means nothing and yet u call it reunion :O :O :P
That's the irony of it girl!Grrr
hehe 55 words....tat was gud...but cudnt understand few things...its coz i suck big time in poems...lol
Thanks but what was it that you could not understand? :)
Btw,it was a very short story and not a poem!
as i usually say
keep em coming sameera
Thanks! :)
i didn't know we can say so much in 55 words! amazing, but hmm.. sad.. and ammu always wanna avoid sad stories. sad stories = sad mood = sad day
hehehe.. hugs!
btwn if don't know this already, yours trully has been nominated for 2 blogger awards:
Best Personal Blog
Most Popular Female Blog
Give me the best ranking, okie??!! :P
thanks hun!
ammu.
sami can we have the comments in a pop-up window :P
Div Babes,any specific reason for it? :)
Hi Ammu,it's the content which always matters than the length right! :)
As for sad stories,they are inevitable in life and they make the happy ones worthwhile!
Oh congrats on getting nominated!Sure will check them out.Good luck!
A nice one !
Thank you!
I love Orange Juice too ! And also mango !! Yum YUm !!!
Aur woh gaan mast hai na ?
Jeejs got good choice..(I meant about that song ok ?)
He he...
nice
Nice to know you too our tastes in juices are alike,Cindy dear!Ya I loved that song the first time I heard it,and the video's classy.
I know his choice is better than mine gal,that's why he has me! :P
Thanks Ishqia!
Congratulations on your work being printed Sameera.
(saw it right now) :)
Thanks :)
Short and Sweeet:)
:)
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