Full of passionDetermined than ever
Deadlier than the seven sins
It slithers hither and thither
Flowing like acid in the veins
Enveloping one and encroaching their being
Thirsty for bloodshed and craving for unrest
Like a wild beast which knows no civilization
Growing stronger and powerful by the moment
In the hues of dawn as well as in the lap of night
Wanting more and more and giving nothing in return
It prevails and spreads, unstoppable by none except that element called...
Have a great month everyone. God Bless!
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*The Hate Will Be Great by Barbara Moll
*Amaizing Love Vectors by Garcya
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Hi Sameera
Good blog this you got. happy march to you. I can see very good poetry out here. keep it up the good work.
Do visit mine, if you find time. dropped here through Firewhisky s blog.
Cheers
Ubermensch.
Nice blog.... your poetry is full of imagery- many great poets use imagery in their poetry which makes their work classical... you have the potential!
Hello Ubermensch,thank you.
I remember having seen your second blog "Taking Strike" before,which belonged to one Sam/Tubby.Changed your profile name is it?
Btw,are those grammatical mistakes in your comment intentional?Just asking cause your blog has an awesome post in the best English ever :)
Happy March to you too!
Welcome here Tinkerbell(cute name btw) and thanks :)
Well I simply love art.I can't make images so good so at least I augment my writing with them!
Let the love flow...:)
Let the feeling be deeper and stronger..Have a lovely March and may God bless us.
Wish I could write like you do..keep posting such beautiful poem my dear.
Love reading it..seriously!
Big hugs*
Take care my dear.
hey sameera... the poem was so vividly lovely!!!
then again i bet ur used to hearing that from me [:D] lolz
Best english ever ? whats that supposed to mean ? a complement ?
It was really nice to be at sameera's heaven
Haapy March too.
Ahem.... March is the month of love it seems....Err...Evry month is a month of love for ya... :)
happy march dear... live it up and let love in :)
oh! it's amazing angel. so vivid imagery.. as if every scene was moving in front of me. n yes my choice is definitely LOVE.
he he :D
happy march to u too. :)
love..hugs..kisses
take care
:) :) :)
What a beautiful and charming poem. It is open ended. There are two elements in the poem. The one described at the onset of the poem and the thing that can stop or suppress it. I would go for ambition for the first and love for the second. Ambition is something that can be vicious and malevolent in its desire for realization. However, it can be stopped on its track by a greater force called love. Those are my two cents worth of ideas for your poem. What a remarkable style you develop my friend. I would say that it is exclusively yours since this is the first time I have encountered such style of poetry. I really love your poetry. I give it a perfect 10. God bless you and your loved ones always my friend. Have a wonderful and great day in Dubai.
Beautiful verse hun!
but I hv a very bad experience attached with the month of March few years ago..so I always fear when Match arrives.
Keshi.
I loved the poem, very lovely indeed :)
Happy March and happy Spring to you :)
Love you!! :)
PS: beware from people who left some comments above, seems like one of them was the same that left me cool anonymous comments last time. I guess you know what i am talking about..
Love you sweetheart, be careful!!
WOW that was beautiful as always
happy march to u too! :D
-I
:) Lovely.. u have a great time ahead too...
powerful lines - am i seeing restrained passion and the unmistakable urge to break free? i feel the power of emotions when i read the lines...
Hi Sameera...hope you are fine and as lovely and happy as the beautiful poem you wrote..
Muahhss, this is for you:
http://noushy-award.blogspot.com/2008/03/best-friend-awardkak-mie.html
Take care my dear, have a gr8 Springtime yea.
I wish the same good for you.
i was readin this post in a small window at work. So had not seen the images posted. I actually wondered from spring sameera is writing deadly poetry. Then it was all hearts! haha! nice one!
happy march to u to samy dear ;)
Oh boy...!!!!
Girl, this was devilish !!
By the time, I had even finished reading the pic hadnt come up, and I was wondering what is she talkin' about.
But, thankgod !!
You little devil..I know you're grinning there.
Have a great week ahead sweets.
**hugs**
Hi Sameera,
Thanks for such a beautiful blog.
Regards,
Rajtilak :)
fooooooooo ki booooooooooo! hehe..... Luv u loadzzzzz!
hi there sameera,
you have such a cute blog here.
i love march...it is the start of summer in my country.
i'll keep dropping by...
Amazing imagery in your poem, Sameera! You've really painted a very strong portrait with words.
love to be in ur space!
hw have u been?
ammu.
hi sameera...thanks for your comment...well its true that it would be "boring if all dreams were sweet"...definitely...but the poem Lets Dream a Dream Together was written with a tone of sarcasm...what i meant to say was that everyone is becoming an unknown citizen today...the reason being they have forgotten how to dream with their eyes open...could you forward me your email id...would love to keep in touch with a fellow blogger...my id is rajtilak.bhattacharjee@gmail.com...
yes as always the choice is ours. I only wish we make the right choices :)
very cool..you write really well...
thanks for sharing the thoughts
Hey Mann!Thanks gal.
You bet I am! ;)
Ubermensch aka Sam aka Tubby,yes that was a compliment about the post in your blog and I don't know why you felt it was sarcastic and had to go to someone else's blog and call me a psycho in their comment section.
I would appreciate if you and your friend A would keep away from this space and not drop innuendos about me everywhere you go.Thank you.
Welcome here and thanks Jyoti!
Uff Zahid Bhai!It was a poem about love and hate :)
And yes,every month is a month of love for me!
Thanks Vands dear!Yup I always do,but at times it is hard to shut out the hate,but then I am getting there :)
Thanks Preeti Darling!Of course I know what your choice is :)
Love ya loads angel.Take care.Hugsss
Hello Mel.The poem was actually about hate and love.But then,too much of ambition also fits in there I guess,and so do many other things which are not good in this world.Thanks for the inspiring comment my friend.This style just struck me while I was writing.
Take care dear friend.God Bless You.
Thanks Keshi dear!
Oh ok.TC.
Thanks Lena sweetie!Love ya too.Hugsss
I do know which person you are talking about :)
Thanks Rajeev! :)
Thanks Hope :)
Yup Noushy sweetie,let the love flow!
Thanks dear.Glad you loved it and I will continue to write,no matter what.
Lots of love & hugs!God Bless You
P.S. Thanks for the award darling :)
Thanks Anoop.The poem is passionate cause of the intensity with which I have described hate.
Everything I do is always enveloped with passion and I am a free soul,so why should there be a restraint to passion or an urge to break free?
Thanks Emperor Ropi.
Thanks Puresunshine :)
Well hearts there maybe,but the description of hate here is sure deadly and my mood when writing this was totally different from the one when writing about spring!
Thanks Prachi dear!
He he Cinderella sweetie!Yup I grinned when I read your comment :)
Sometimes,the words have to be devilish in order to get the message across.It's all in the mood when writing,ain't it?
Love & Hugs!
Welcome here Rajtilak and thanks.
I appreciate you coming back to explain the hidden meaning of the poem in your blog.
As for keeping in touch,you can always keep in touch through the blogger interface.
Thank you and take care.
Kya hai Jaanu?Paeh!Love you too loads and loads.Umma :)
Hey Shnaggy,welcome here and thanks!
Will look forward to seeing you and Kookie again :)
Thanks so much Nicky dear!
Thanks Tulipspeaks,you are always welcome here :)
I am doing fine,thanks for asking!
TC.
Well most of us do Raaji,but some totally love to harp on hate!
Thank you Ceedy!
You are welcome.
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